Thursday, January 7, 2010

Dec Update

Yes it's a little late but better than never :D So here is everything that I have so far.

Please give me feedback on anything you see but mainly I want to focus on the shot structure and compositions keeping in mind the set story. Let me know if I need to add subtract or change anything. Thank you for your help :)

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  1. When frank draws his first character, I think his facial expressions should get progressively happier. That way when the little guy jumps out the window its a bit more devastating. Right now he kinda looks confused the whole time. So to sum up, i think his emotional arc should be: confused, then is happier and just when he is about to explode with joy, CRUSH HIM!!!1!1

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